Art Dump

The hips are too pronounced. The soldier looks like Nicki Minaj.

 

Refine the line-art more. The scratchy, sketchy illustration is nice to a certain extent, but it seems you're going for realism, and the style of the lines is inconsistent.

 

This is what came to mind strait away:

http://www.ace-spades.com/

 

I thought that too, given by the fact that he's previously posted fan-art for the game.

 

Oh, completely forgot this thread.
Thanks for the tips, I agree with everything, especially with the sketchy lines :)

However can't change anything - I have lost the PSD file, but maybe it is better so.
Less saturation was what I could do though.

 

Come on, show us!

 

There isn't really anything atm, but when there is I'll post about it.
And yeah please do show.

 

Reshaped anatomy for this one, thanks for CrazyMLC's effort to help me here.

 

That looks really good, looks kinda like an albino monk.. I assume that was the point but yeah...

 

So you play as english theoretical physicist and cosmologist with motor neurone disease. Gameplay focuses on the actual feeling of having to select words and actions with your movements using the device called Equalizer. Speak your wisdom, make your wheelchair jump or shoot missiles! Browse different actions from your bindings and get confused where is what during the moment of panic. Now speed up into the midst of wilderness and wipe out those flexible contortionists out of jealousy.

Art is kinda meh this time, but I was focusing on the lulsy concept more.

 

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Does that cluster yellow dot really belong there?

 

No it doesn't, but I had like 18 layers there as a result of a huge struggle with the background. Didn't want to search every layer just for a yellow dot.

 

You could you know, just make them invisible untill you find the layer with the dot.

 

What dot?

 

The yellow dot you're trying to pretent never was there ;)

 

Can you make like an 2d rambo? like mine

 

A guy you wouldn't want to walk to in the streets.