Poetry Contest

Nope, for the time being I'll remove it to avoid confusion.

 

Zombies everywhere
wraith spawn mechanics are bad
oh god dead again

 

That was six not seven
And they are migrants , not mechs.
The game is awesome

 

(1)Wraith (2)spawn (3)mech- (4)an- (5)ics (6)are (7)bad.

Also, he was referring to the mechanics of how wraiths spawn. He did not mistake migrants for mechanics.

EDIT: Also, your first line had six syllables, not five.

 

In his defense I edited it to correct it from "suck" to "are bad"

("It's changing from suck, to blow!")

 

Oh god the irony is off the roof.
And I seem to have broken the Haiku
I can't wait until the winner is announced.

 

Oh god, my bad. That's funny though! Also, I originally thought that you were writing another haiku there, Door! :p

 

And so we wait here, twiddling our long hefty thumbs, 'til this comp is done...
It matters the not! We shall just pass the time of day: I wish to hear MOAR! :D
I guess I will start!... Although it started before. Mine head is the derp. >_<
Just below this line (I hope you will enjoy it!) is a quick haiku:
Shield a leaf of steel
Falls upon the man of red
Shall he rise again?
Haiku in English. :) How to place the kireji, I have not a clue! D:
(See what I did thar? I hope you are all observant, there is much to see! ;) )
It's not all like this, as they can be different: two or four are fine!
You see this is a haiku:
Haiku in zip form is the bomb! ^__^

 

Update Haiku:

I Spawn as a Knight,
Bomb jump two feet into spikes,
Try it with a keg.

 

Well...I don't really understand but I'll try my best!

Red vs Blue, the wall is huge (1)
The dead King Arthur's Gold is in our hold (2)
With knights and archers, an imaginary world (3)
Arrows fly, swords strike, until the night (4)
Dark and tight, we squeeze into dirt (5)
Dig, dig, dig, funnel into the tunnel (6)
We hear them sleeping, place the bombs(7)
Kaboom! The base is ours!(8)
Surrender! We have you surrounded!(9)
Take their weapons! We have them routed(10)
A low thudding groan, a scream in the darkness(11)
It must be a dream, but there he, the King(12)
But he is dead, yet still alive, there is no way!(13)
The red stained clothes, the King says "I want my Gold"(14)
That's what they told, what happened in Fort Alpha(15)
We now defend, the last town of Camela!(16)

I'm in middle school and not really into poetry but I hope I did it correctly!

 

I'm in middle school too,
Your grammar is better than almost everyone I see at your age.

 

Thanks! I'm working on my goal of being a Novelist/Storyboard person for games/movies :]

 

There is mine! (My main language is not english, but i will try)

It was a lot of time ago,
There was a knight who killed almost everyone.
One time an archer got a bow,
And shoot him in the back.

The knight respawned,
he was looking for revenge,
he walked and walked
but the archer made a change.

He was now a knight,
With a sword and a shield,
He went walking to the right,
In to the fighting field.

The first knight became an archer in a safe position,
The second knight went after him,
The archer bought ammunition,
And shoot him in the knee!

 

Then the knight, sad as he might, became a guard.

 

In my case Gard.:p

 

I resent this statement but I'll give it a crack anyway.

Code:

The King of Man recruited us
The King of Man commanded us
To slay the villains of red coats
To slay the threat and cut their throats
 
King of Men, why do we fight?
O King of Men, is this really right?
We fight not foes that tread our land
We fight our brothers,
 
You fund this war of blasphemy
You fund this war whose reason unseen
My fallen brothers doth die in vain
In pointless war hath they been slain
 
King of Malice, O King of Greed
You fuel this war we do not need
We all collect gold all the same
We all collect gold in your glorious name

My headcanon has always been that King Arthur pit his own armies against each other for kicks.

 

Loved that one! Thine truth hath been spake!

 

The contest ends tonight at 11:59 PM!

 

Can I make edits to my poem?

 

as long as it is before due date.