1st time making music

Hello everyone, I got bored last night and slapped this together in FL Studio 10.
This is a trance remix of Intensive Care Unit.
Tell me how shitty it is.
http://snd.sc/Zgj0qn

P.S.: I'm no artist, so this is an incredible feat for me

I've made an 8-bit remix of Scary Monsters and Nice Sprites by Skrillex, link below.
(This one was just for fun)
http://snd.sc/XVbKU9

My third time punching around FL Studio (and my PC monitor) and I somehow came up with this!
Turn on your subwoofer and crank up the bass for this one!
http://snd.sc/Y9x9Jj

 

I liked it, mellowed me out a bit after a rough day x3.

 

LOL! There's always gonna be a tune similar to something goofy I guess :p

 

Lmao Hella, I remember that one. But yes my song and the one in your link are both remixes of the same song.

Thanks Wolffkran, I meant for it to be a tune that says Just chill.

 

Well it definitely sends that message lol.

 

Original post updated; added another song.
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Original post updated to include 3rd mix
Please tell me what you think about my music, I would like some feedback!

 

First Time...? Liar

 

No lie, these 3 songs are the 1st I've ever made :P

 

Good Job c:

 

Thank you :D

 

Loving the new song! Although I liked the first two more x3. Keep up the good work though lol. And I bet you are a liar, this is probably your 500th time :p sounds like it anyway.

 

Thanks for the compliments everyone, they're what keeps me going :)

 

What kind of software did you use?

 

FL Studio 10 Producers Edition

 

When's the next song? I've been needing a pick me up for my week ;p

 

#3 needs more sidechain sidechain sidechain and distortion with a metric fuckton of distortion for the kick , get a nice 909 sample , it sounds kinda like hard trance/hardstyle so I think the bass needs more work, start eq'ing everything its the most important part............