King Arthur's Gold Rap

what do u guys think



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HDkkYeMXug0

 

I like the first comment on the video's page

 

Good try ;______________________________________________________________________________________;

 

A wise dog once said "sucking at something is the first step to becoming kinda good at something."

Real talk this is terrible, your flow is weak and your lyrics leave a lot to be desired. I recommend working on your rhyming and maybe even reading a bit about metre.

But don't let that discourage you. Keep at it.

 

i give it 4 snoop dogs out of 5 snoop lions

 

It's like talking with music, sorry. But keep trying (: Practice makes perfect, after all.
Perhaps a better track would help. The rhythm was kind of jerky.

 

thanks for all the feedback even though its bad i mean i got 1 like lol even if i did get 8 dislikes im trying my best and i wanna make something great so everyone on kag remembers my name lol

 

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

WTF IS THIS

 

You should probably stick to pixel art, you're better at it.

 

It's more like rape than rap.

 

Lmao? Keep practicing buddy, +1 for making my day.

 

Alright, here we go.

This is king arthurs gold,
where the knights are so bold.
and the nights, oh so cold,
fighting against the zeds,
that are replacing the reds,
and if you get hurt, you better make some beds,
arrows flying everywhere,
bombs exploding in the air,
that one almost tinged my hair!
that silly red is mining stone,
while his wife in battle is getting boned,
the blue knights are, SO the best,
usually starting in the west,
shiny armor on their chest,

took me 2 minutes to write that. mabye more later if this gets some likes<3

 

It reminded me of this, also a note for everyone you don't need to have a bazillion couplets for it to be a rap.

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