TDM [REJECTED] Leszek_Miller: SLD Edition

Map name: Leszek_Miller_SLD
Gamemode: TDM
Symmetrical: Yes
Special features:

• 3 random items next to spawn
• chests
• no shark
• trampolines
• collapsible stuff - use explosives. also burn some shit down too
• fight with people over spikes

Use the environment! There's an archer camping using grapple? Collapse the platform using a bomb. Someone's coming from above? Jump on a trampoline and stomp him. Fighting on mid? Stun him into spikes.

Map:

The Leszek doesn't ruin the map. pls let him stay.
Screenshots:

The second screenshots has the wooden parts burned.

@EDIT:

A huge update has been made. Due to Geti's shenanigans, parts of the far lands of Leszek Miller have been buried under dirt. Fortunately, their overlord The Leszek has survived it.

so, yeah. Geti helped me make this map, so it's basically our collab (?).

--- Double Post Merged, Aug 1, 2017, Original Post Date: Aug 1, 2017 ---

Update has been made, check it out.

@edit:
tramp fix

 

Why do your eyes hurt after looking at the mighty face of his majesty Leszek? He's sad now :(

 

Geti and bunnie had a baby and we all named it cancer. BTW this is kag2 right?

 

Spoiler: DONK

Tramps are pointless when all they do is make you bonk your head. Floating middle dirt island looks very campy currently, knight campy specifically.

The map still looks really ugly, I don't believe you've made any edits after Geti (my apologies if you have) and he only submitted a very rough draft of the map to you.

I agree with what geti said about not having to "fully commit to your gimmick" because it seems like that's what's dragging the map down.

Get a theme going, some visuals, something to look at besides ugly floating dirt and stuff. And as Geti said "Cut down the clutter quite a lot more."

 

I fixed the tramps and am not going to change anything else. i like the map the way it is now, and i don't think the map is too cluttered. there's much less stuff to collapse now and i don't want to make it even worse, so i won't do any further updates concerning that

 

Then i'm sorry to say but i'm going to have to reject this one too.

The collapse gimmick aspect in the remake has been mostly stomped out by the gold blocks and such which was honestly the main appeal of the original.

An example of the maps clutter is

Spoiler: here

It hurts the eyes to look at, ESPECIALLY with the gold and dirt backwall now in play.

Rejected.

 

Tdm maps havent been judged based off looks or else Eluded's mansion wouldve been laughed out of the room

 

^ eluded mansion's isn't even THAT good for movement or gameplay. mazey literally accepted it because "tdm map".