CTF Ferrezinhre_Collapse [REJECTED]

I'd like to give some feedback on this one, it's interesting that you came from regular-looking average CTF maps to a more constrained -yet controlled- gameplay offer like this one.

First, and as you migth have guessed, almost nobody will like the small amount of gold and wood it provides. I do like it, as this cave-like map isn't asking for hundreds of blocks that treefarms and quarries will provide, yet it asks quite possibly for either 2 teleporters or a further spawn point in a upgraded or not ballista. Bomb bolts wouldn't hurt in this one I think, but that's not needed at all.

For this idea, perhaps it's worth considering making the mid slightly wider vertically (it's 6 tiles at it's narrower sides, which are both mid entrances) so players could think of creating 2 passages at mid, 1 for offensive push the other 1 for countering. This however will always lead to a bottleneck in mid (that's half frustration half glory depending on the very player). Also, by placing the passage at that height, the bedrock ramp that leads to it from the bottom part is going to be very problematic, frustrating for defenders and very decissive for attackers. You could solve both issues above by adding a possible passage, dirted or not, just right below, as if you place it upper it's going to be even more of an overpowered position. Check the pic.

The base area is going to be fairly awkward to start building. You could kind of make a suggestion to the players on what would be the best base, space and navigation wise, by leveling it a bit and giving a bit more of ground near the tent. The tent is the place you start, it should be cleaner imho.

On the areas I made 2 circles, happens something similar, you have builders happily tunneling on the ceiling, but those 2 bedrock areas are blockign it for them, and also for defenders it'd be too harsh to counter the builders coming from there. Perhaps that's intended so as to protect the upper flag somehow, but I think you could get rid of that bedrock and leave it as dirt. Forget the circle in the mid area, it just looks unnecessary to have stone in that pixel, as it's not worth the digging.

Lastly, the squares within the bedrock, that give some light, add visual noise when ingame. I believe you could leave it plain bedrock in those areas.

Hope I helped

 

Rejected - The mapping team has decided to reject this map.

Spoiler: Why?

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