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Discussion in 'KAG Media' started by Lemmingworld, Sep 3, 2012.

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Do you like it so far?

  1. Yeah its good.

  2. Nope I dont like it.

  3. Where are teh wafflez?

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  1. Lemmingworld

    Lemmingworld Haxor

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    Last edited: Mar 17, 2025
    Lemmingworld, Sep 3, 2012
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    barge74, Stevedog, Lieber and 4 others like this.
  2. FuzzyBlueBaron

    FuzzyBlueBaron Warm, Caring, Benign, Good and Kind Philanthrope Global Moderator Forum Moderator Donator Tester
    1. The Young Blood Collective - [YB]

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    Loving it. :B):

    I've taken the liberty of adding in some line breaks & punctuation for you. In case you don't like the changes I've PM'd you an unedited copy of your first chapter. Maybe compare the two copies to see what kind of things I changed; that way you can learn more skills for your next installment. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask them of me. ;)
     
    FuzzyBlueBaron, Sep 3, 2012
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  3. Ghozt

    Ghozt Haxor

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    The amazing FBB. <3

    This is all quite good. I like to think I started some of this story writing stuff. https://forum.kag2d.com/threads/story-king-arthurs-army.7175/

    I can already tell you play TF2. (99% sure at-least) (For everyone, the Blue coloured team in TF2 is named Blu.

    Good story, the only problem I really have with it is that the story has progressed so quickly. Anyway, as FBB says, you have the first and most important rule of writing down.

    WRITING!
     
    Ghozt, Sep 3, 2012
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  4. Riletyface

    Riletyface Horde Gibber

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    It has a nice taste to it - I liked it.
     
    Riletyface, Sep 3, 2012
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  5. Doc22

    Doc22 Builder Stabber

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    Cool story bro, Tell it again!
    :p
     
    Doc22, Sep 3, 2012
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  6. Lord_bugg

    Lord_bugg Smashing Donator

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    Really good story. How long for chapter 2?
     
    Lord_bugg, Sep 3, 2012
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  7. Ghozt

    Ghozt Haxor

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    People don't get alerts if you edit the OP. Just for an example with what I did with my story, I made the first post contain a index to all other chapters.


    Ah, thanks!
     
    Ghozt, Sep 3, 2012
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  8. Lord_bugg

    Lord_bugg Smashing Donator

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    Oh yeah,I didn't realise that.
     
    Lord_bugg, Sep 3, 2012
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  9. Lieber

    Lieber Is Probing Uranus Global Moderator Forum Moderator Donator Tester

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    I like the mix of actual computer software with the game, it was really well done.

    Reminds me that I have to finish mine.
     
    Lieber, Sep 4, 2012
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  10. Sirpixelot

    Sirpixelot Base Burner
    1. Aphelion's Roleplay

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    "I am the A.I." cheesy... but awesome all the same. I like this story bro, very awesome.
    Keep up the good work :3
     
    Sirpixelot, Sep 4, 2012
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