Story Scorpio

Introduction:
Once upon a time, a long time ago, there was a kingdom named Camelot. There was a forest to the far west of Camelot, named the Silverveil Woods. An elf lived there, and his name was Scorpio. He LOVED adventure, and every time an opportunity came up, he accepted.

Chapter 1
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One day, Scorpio was walking through the Town Square. He was planning on buying a pet. He turned around the corner, and he found a pet shop. So he went in. There were thousands of different pets there. The store was huge!
Scorpio looked around for a pet that he liked. He looked for a couple of minutes, and he found a cat. It was very blue. He looked at the label above the cage, and it said "Ice Cat". Scorpio thought it might be a good pet, but he kept looking. He found another cat, and this time, it was black. He looked above the cage, and it said "Black Tooth Cat". Right next to the label, it said "WARNING! VERY DANGEROUS, BITE CAN CAUSE INSTANT DEATH." So Scorpio didn't think about getting him. He kept walking, until he found a black and white cat. It said on the label "Telekinetic Cat".
Scorpio took the cat.

Chapter 2
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Scorpio showed his friends and his family his new pet. They all loved him. They enjoyed watching him lift things with his mind. Scorpio named the cat Aldwyn. They loved to walk through the forest together, and when there was some sort of roadblock, Aldwyn moved it.
As they were walking through the forest, they came upon a dwarf in old, torn-apart, rags for clothing. Scorpio asked the man why he's in the forest, and why he has no good clothes.
"I'm very poor, and orcs came by to my house 2 days ago, and burned it down. My family was killed."
Scorpio felt a lot of hatred towards orcs now.
"Well, is there anything I can help you with? Maybe, shelter, food, water, and some clean clothes?"
"There sure is. I'm glad you found me."
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Author's Note:
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Chapter 3
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Scorpio and the dwarf walked through the woods, back to Scorpio's house.
"What's your name, dwarf?"
"Michael."
"My name is Scorpio."
"Very nice name, and very nice to meet you," said Michael.
"Thanks, and you too," said Scorpio.
After walking for 20 minutes, they finally reached Scorpio's house.
"This is my house," said Scorpio.
"Woah! Amazing structure!" exclaimed Michael.
"Scorpio? Is that you?"
"Yes Mom," replied Scorpio.
"Good, it's very late," said Scorpio's mother.
*Scorpio's mother peeks through the door.*
"Who's this?" asked Mrs. Elfson.
"This is Michael, he's a dwarf I found in the woods. His home was burned, and his family was killed by a gang of orcs," Scorpio answered.
"Nice to meet you ma'am," said Michael.
"You boys need to come inside. We can discuss Michael's stay and things during supper," Mrs. Elfson said.
"Coming!" Michael and Scorpio said in unison.

Chapter 4
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"Who are you?" asked Mr. Elfson, Tansly, and Jack asked at the same time.
"This is Michael, a homeless dwarf with no family. He's going to be staying with us," replied Mrs. Elfson.
"How do you all do?" asked Michael.
"Good," the Elfson family replied.
"Tonight, we'll be eating some herbal stew. Is that ok? Our daughter, Tansly, has cooked for her very first time." Mr. Elfson said.
"Yes, that's quite all right with me!" replied Michael.
The elves and the dwarf ate their herbal stew in silence.
"You can stay here for as long as you need," Mrs. Elfson said to Michael.
"Ok, thank you very much," Michael replied.
"You can use our guest bedroom," Mrs. Elfson said.
Michael smiled to the family. It'd been his first time smiling for a long time.
Michael finished supper, and he washed up at the Silverveil river. Then, Mrs. Elfson led Michael to the guest bedroom, and Michael climbed into bed, and fell asleep immediately.
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"Elfson" was the only surname I could think of. I'm sorry if it's stupid, but I did my best for this, and I hope you enjoyed these 2 more chapters. If you people who read this, can try and make it more popular, I'd be very thankful! The more votes for more chapters I get, the more I'll write! Have fun reading! I'm sorry for the length of these chapters, and I apologize for all of the conversation, and no action or anything, but it's the way it's gonna be. It'll progess through, little by little! :)

 

So far so good

 

Thanks! I needed a lot of time to think what was going to happen.
P.S. IF YOU GUYS WANNA BE IN THE STORY, USE THE TEMPLATE I PUT IN THE FIRST POST!

 

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Name: (Doesn't have a name, he just says 'whatever' when people ask him)
Creature/Profession: Some cool dude (human) wearing sun glasses and suede jacket, doesn't have a job
What your profession means: Hanging next to hot elf chicks
Brief Description of Creature: A bit of douche to scorpio and the guy elves
Good/Evil: Evil (kinda like a bully)

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I'll do my best, I don't know when I'll write more though. I'm glad you participated in the story :)
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Why is there so many dislikes for my story? D: