Comments on Profile Post by Reudh

You mean here? https://forum.kag2d.com/threads/beasters-thread.8383/ I've read it, and replied. Thanks for the feedback once again, man.

Grr, I'm supposed to receive an alert for that. It hasn't worked.

Ain't no thang, baby dawll. I don't love you less.

:'D

Also, this might seem like a silly question but do you mind if I add in those suggestions of your's?

Of course not! It's your story, but stories do benefit from a bit of 'field testing' if you know what I mean. Every bit of marked up writing I do in the forum is public domain.

Actually, I'm pretty damn glad that I through it in the thread as early as I did. In my google doc, I had another paragraph. I read your critique, then read my story and realised that I was rushing things. I'm going to add more to the second paragraph, and possibly a third paragraph describing the scenery, I think.