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opinions?
just trying stuff, im not that good ;;
took the kag colors as you suggested in the thread, and made a pk emblem because bored.
what can i improve (except outline B^) )
well ok your idea of form is good and thats the most important part but it still needs a certain amount of polish; you neglected to antialias the sides of the pumpkin which make it look very jaggy, the insides may need some work as well
actually you know what another thing thats been bugging me but i wasnt able to put my figure on is the negative space all around the emblem, if you notice in mine and geti's emblems is that there is always something touching the sides of the emblem, usually at least the charge but often the figure as well
yours feels isolated in the center, this is getting super subjective but i think it would look better if you modified the charges to connect to the sides in some way
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