Art Dump

2nd time making a bush , please someone give me tips on improving it

these are for my thanksgiving texture pack (this is a cranberry bush)

 

i think its good, but ! You should also show us actual version of it. I cant see shit. .-. I finished my character, flower girl. flower girl—someone who sells flowers that they could find underfoot near the flower seller's stalls. No living was remotely possible on what even a successful flower girl could make and most of them turned to prostitution as soon as they were remotely old enough. <--- Victorian era <- the dress was just too pretty to trash it without saving .-. <- actual final vers

 

what do you mean actual version of it ? you mean the plant? google cranberry bush.
this is the bush you will see when using my texture pack , you want me to show it ingame?
(also i did it as a training , so might revamp it)

 

the bush you posted is zoomed in .-. i wanted to see the actual game size sprite edit: rate my character breh :p

 

i like it , but the black outlines bottom of the dress look like a penus.

 

Thanks ! The second vers was made very fast, but i think it looks ok, why dont you like it ? Could you pls describe it more ? :p EDIT: you understand why i made the dirt, right ?

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<--- and i thought my imagination is weird... well... thanks xD

 

I thought i described it pretty well. :p In Victoria era, the "flower girls" Were obviously from slums. No living was remotely possible on what even a successful flower girl could make and most of them turned to prostitution as soon as they were remotely old enough. The other class of flowergirls is composed of girls who, wholly or partially, depend upon the sale of flowers for their own support or as an assistance for their parents. They are generally very persevering, more especially the younger children, who will run along barefooted, with their,“Please, gentleman, do buy my flowers. Poor little girl!” or “Please kind lady, buy my violets. O, do! please! Poor little girl! Do buy a bunch, please, kind lady!” "I was born in London. Mother was a chairwoman, and lived very well. None of us ever saw a father. We were all ‘mother’s children.’ Mother died seven years ago last Guy Fawkes’ day. I’ve got myself, and my brother and sister a bit of bread ever since, and never had any help but from the neighbours. I never troubled the parish.”

 

thats one grumpy cat

 

Found a cool little free tile-based 3d modelling tool:
http://crocotile3d.com/


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Im more into 2d :p

 

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Which one is better?
Autumn Grass:

Semi-Autumn Grass:
(might edit bushes to match with each type)

 

i dont like the semi-autumn grass. Its a grass with a gold paint all over it EDIT :doing skirt 4 time or 5... i had to cut her to pieces and i will have to change colors of the skirt, change boob pads thingies... .-. fix the broken hand..... make the thighs longer i bet p.p i guess... im not sleeping tonight.

 

though this makes it look more realistic ,with some dry grass and other green , it also makes green plants fit more in the environment

 

i don't understand how you guys can draw , i cant use the mouse.

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Update on my texture pack , (please give replies cause i want to know what you think of it)

Might think why the grass is semi-autumn , i kinda like it , feels more realistic than all of the grass orange (also green plants can fit in the environment)

 

Nice art ! You have some talent (not like me xD) i always fek everything up and spend ridiculous amount time on it :p

 

Recently, I've been messing around with Asesprite and boy that was addicting. Knowing myself, this will probably never be finished, but here's a screenshot of my progress anyway.

 

Art can be very addicting. x) Playing around with shading and stuff is a lot of fun to me. :p And ofc i cant forget about ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) <-- currently shading it edit: 1 leg might be too fat :x <shading finished i think :p <-- i can make dem boob-cracks all day long. <--- pure luck + the godly shading of gold from Castlevania. Konami much love. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Finally finished ! It was hard.... .-. let me know which version of the sword is the best, first one is the first ver, the rest is edited kinda clumsy :p

Spoiler: closer look

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Ur boob crack is off centre,
this triggers me