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(...so you still have control... interesting... )

 

I am Lee 23 years of age and assassin of the southern hills i have been fighting the zombies in the southern deserts for....i don't know how long but my sword is blunt my arrows spent and my poison dry i am neutral but i will have my revenge both on the king for banishing me and the one who controls the zombies. (? plz)

 

(;) I think I can see the potential of another twist.)

 

(Too much twists for my taste already.. D:
Please use commas, lukepop.. oh and also, you're not in. Dayumn.)

 

(Someone sould message xChapx to so he can join.)

 

(ohhh i really wanted to get in)

(what if i do a different name?)

(Oh well, i am ,really sorry about that you see no one told me.)

 

(I think it's grammar and such. Facebook may be a forum where there is no need for capital letters and and such but this is a real forum, we actually use that stuff and anyone who doesn't is considered a noob. It's just how it is.)

 

(What if I fixed my spelling and grammar i'm normally really good at it at school I just wasn't aware besides you said you would let Zuke in if he/she learnt his/her grammar,spelling and storytelling.Well is this enough?As I was walking down the path i spotted a small man,a sort of dwarf.I walked up to this dwarf and he said "Adventurer,choose a boar,the gold,the silver,the bronze or the stone".I said to the dwarf"I will take the stone boar".I grated the boar on my sword and he asked"Why did you take the stone boar"."For this",and i ran him through with my now sharpened sword.)

 

(Watch your "i"s, and make sure that after a comma and a full stop that you have a space. And after and before the speech marks you should have a space. So your thing should read like this; (As I was walking down the path I spotted a small man, a sort of dwarf. I walked up to this dwarf and he said "Adventurer, choose a boar, the gold, the silver, the bronze or the stone". I said to the dwarf "I will take the stone boar". I grated the boar on my sword and he asked "Why did you take the stone boar". "For this",and I ran him through with my now sharpened sword.) see how it looks much more neat)

 

(Why on earth was he offering boars?)

 

(LOL)

 

(Yes I do, In fact last time i tried very hard to correct my mistakes, In fact I double checked.)

 

(That 'i' is there again. :P)

 

(DAMM ITT)

 

Fixed it for you.

 

(LOL)

 

(I meant for the second T to emphasize my point.)
(Anyway could I pretty, pretty please.)

 

(i (Yes, i'm mocking you) would allow you but it's not up to me)

 

You still spelt damn wrong.

Trolololol