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Story Tales of Dilavia: The Prophecy (Story in progress)

Discussion in 'KAG Media' started by Lieber, Jul 25, 2012.

  1. Froghead48

    Froghead48 Haxor

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    You should do one for the server!
     
  2. Lieber

    Lieber Is Probing Uranus Global Moderator Forum Moderator Donator Tester

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    I should actually!
     
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  3. CattleTheBoss

    CattleTheBoss Tree Planter

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    ah well the language is not so important but make some videos in eng. i say.Just a tip :)
     
  4. Lieber

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    Planning on doing some, with a presentation of the server being the first :)

    Ok, now I might start writing Chapter 4.
     
  5. Froghead48

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    I could get some of the Experiance'd RP'er (Cerby, Dragon, ect ) and we could RP your stoy.
     
  6. Lieber

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    It was already RPed though. To make it as a video you mean?
     
  7. Froghead48

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    Yes!
     
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  8. Lieber

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    That could be interesting! SO MANY NEW THINGS!

    Got to finish writing the story first and before September because after that there are so many games coming out.
     
  9. CattleTheBoss

    CattleTheBoss Tree Planter

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    :) :right: Chapter Four
     
  10. Madbow

    Madbow Horde Gibber

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    Oi if your holding an rp event invite me, my club is out for the summer
     
  11. CattleTheBoss

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    Lol the video you destroyed your teams tower with a boulder on a catapult :D
     
  12. Lieber

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    Please don't remind me about that time. x)
     
  13. Madbow

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    I though you where going to hit the keg but that was even better :)
     
  14. CattleTheBoss

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    Tip:I think you should use tavern istead of hotels and restaurants.
     
  15. Lieber

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    Edited for Inns and Taverns ^^
     
  16. CattleTheBoss

    CattleTheBoss Tree Planter

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    Yaaay im helpful!:B):
    Edit:Where is chapter 4?
     
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  17. Froghead48

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    Write chapter 4 already, damnit!
     
  18. Lieber

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    I am... thinking about how to write it x)
    I just got stuck in a quite uninteresting chapter I have to say.
     
  19. Aha, I know that feel bro.

    When you get to that part of it, just think of how the actions in that chapter will allow your characters to move to the next chapter, and it becomes less boring to write. One of my teachers used to tell me:
    "In a story, each sentence should not be superfluous. It should either: provide character development, provide plot development, or provide exposition on either."
     
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  20. Lieber

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    Yeah, it's an important chapter because it plays heavily into the plot...
    I need to think some more.