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Story Tales of Dilavia: The Prophecy (Story in progress)

Discussion in 'KAG Media' started by Lieber, Jul 25, 2012.

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  1. Froghead48

    Froghead48 Haxor

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    You should do one for the server!
     
    Froghead48, Aug 16, 2012
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  2. Lieber

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    I should actually!
     
    Lieber, Aug 16, 2012
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  3. CattleTheBoss

    CattleTheBoss Tree Planter

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    ah well the language is not so important but make some videos in eng. i say.Just a tip :)
     
    CattleTheBoss, Aug 16, 2012
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  4. Lieber

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    Planning on doing some, with a presentation of the server being the first :)

    Ok, now I might start writing Chapter 4.
     
    Lieber, Aug 16, 2012
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  5. Froghead48

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    I could get some of the Experiance'd RP'er (Cerby, Dragon, ect ) and we could RP your stoy.
     
    Froghead48, Aug 16, 2012
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  6. Lieber

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    It was already RPed though. To make it as a video you mean?
     
    Lieber, Aug 16, 2012
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  7. Froghead48

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    Yes!
     
    Froghead48, Aug 16, 2012
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  8. Lieber

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    That could be interesting! SO MANY NEW THINGS!

    Got to finish writing the story first and before September because after that there are so many games coming out.
     
    Lieber, Aug 16, 2012
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  9. CattleTheBoss

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    :) :right: Chapter Four
     
    CattleTheBoss, Aug 16, 2012
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  10. Madbow

    Madbow Horde Gibber

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    Oi if your holding an rp event invite me, my club is out for the summer
     
    Madbow, Aug 16, 2012
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  11. CattleTheBoss

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    Lol the video you destroyed your teams tower with a boulder on a catapult :D
     
    CattleTheBoss, Aug 16, 2012
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  12. Lieber

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    Please don't remind me about that time. x)
     
    Lieber, Aug 16, 2012
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  13. Madbow

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    I though you where going to hit the keg but that was even better :)
     
    Madbow, Aug 16, 2012
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  14. CattleTheBoss

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    Tip:I think you should use tavern istead of hotels and restaurants.
     
    CattleTheBoss, Aug 16, 2012
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  15. Lieber

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    Edited for Inns and Taverns ^^
     
    Lieber, Aug 16, 2012
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  16. CattleTheBoss

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    Yaaay im helpful!:B):
    Edit:Where is chapter 4?
     
    CattleTheBoss, Aug 17, 2012
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  17. Froghead48

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    Write chapter 4 already, damnit!
     
    Froghead48, Aug 24, 2012
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  18. Lieber

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    I am... thinking about how to write it x)
    I just got stuck in a quite uninteresting chapter I have to say.
     
    Lieber, Aug 24, 2012
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  19. Reudh

    Reudh Haxor Global Moderator Forum Moderator Tester
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    Aha, I know that feel bro.

    When you get to that part of it, just think of how the actions in that chapter will allow your characters to move to the next chapter, and it becomes less boring to write. One of my teachers used to tell me:
    "In a story, each sentence should not be superfluous. It should either: provide character development, provide plot development, or provide exposition on either."
     
    Reudh, Aug 24, 2012
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  20. Lieber

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    Yeah, it's an important chapter because it plays heavily into the plot...
    I need to think some more.
     
    Lieber, Aug 24, 2012
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